Excellent Poem.

Very great choice of words. I think its a bit cruel to call someone your "Mephistophelian" I mean, Calling someone your "Cunning wicked Devil" is... A bit too far dont you think?

Anyways. Enjoyed the poem. TRULY. I shall add you to my favorites. Again. Great choice of words. Although please be careful on the words you use. I may have understood some of those words but others might not.

Anyways. Excellent poem again. Please write more.

[Deathly'Amore]

I thought ur poem was awesome.

how long did it take you to write it?

Hay there.

Wow. That was incrediably deep.
I sat here nodding my head, agreeing with everything as i read along.
Im sure many people can realate.

I loved how you repeated 'You came, you sat, and you smiled'. It gave it a really nice touch.
Keep up the great writing. 5/5
Bec.x

I can understand how the use of Mephistophelian in this poem has added more flavours in to it. Though the word is like a jargon, the intented meaning is lucid and very interesting.

ppl say verbose poems are not that good, but after reading this piece I am having the impression changed and its just flawless I would say. You just got it right the way you wanted.

OMG were you talking about me? i felt like you were, htat is how relatable is was. ine if your best in my opinion.
5/5
Julie

I THOUGHT IT WAS GOOD...ALOTE OF BIG WORDS...IT SLOWED ME DOWN...BUT IT WAS REAL GOOD 5/5

This is good, i was going to ask you what Mephistophelian was but i like how you put the def. at the bottom...i think this is a good poem to let people wit Bulimia read because maybe it can help...keep up the good work!

Omg this is truely amazing! so well written!! well done! 5/5

Wow! is all i can really say! i can relate! great job 5/5