Great poem i like it

Thank you.

Ah, well i hope she still remembers that kiss too :p
lovely poem mate. 5/5, you're the better poet :p

Cute poem you could tell that had to come straight from the heart
carly

Cute poem you could tell that had to come straight from the heart
carly

The title of this poem catched my attention..
your writing style is good. excellent job.

5/5

Very nice, I like how you seemed to capture and explain the moment. It was very well written in a nice pleasent poetry style. Well done. It had emotion in it, and that makes a good poem.

~Akira

The title is very catchy. it's very simple, yet so full of emotion. i think that's hard to do. good job =]

Its so sweet, LOVE it! 5/5

Loved itt!!! keep up your amazingg poems!! 5/5

That was great! Comment back please:) you're an amazing writer

Wow. this poem was short, sweet and beautiful.
i loved the flow to it and the way you expressed yerself so well.
i love yer other poems also and the way you write is unique. and it's true, you can never forget your true love's first kiss. i kno i can't.
job well done.
5/5.