Comments : I kind of miss her..

  • 16 years ago

    by Ayumi

    The ones in the brackets are my thoughts. I apologize if it's not very good, there's some errors or it doesn't rhyme well. It depends on my mood for a nice poem. :(

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent. I just have a doubt what does that last F in BFF stands for?? I liked your poems. Its well written. You could add icing on the cake by making it more thrilling. Well its worth 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Thanks. :)
    BFF - Best Friends Forever
    There's another:
    BFFL - Best Friends For Life

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Aw thats sad T^T I can somehow relate. They way you put this poem was planned well and the words fit in well. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Thanks very much! I wish she'd turn a new leaf and come back.. *sniffs*

  • 16 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Thank you veeeery much! ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Thank you thank you thank you! ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    I really love it....
    i can relate with the poem for i also went through this.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Gee, it's hard, isn't it? :( Thanks for the comment!

    Ayu #

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ReallY aN amazinG joB oN thE poeM! iT floweD nicelY, yoU arE sO talenteD thE waY yoU writE. >>>>>>> excellenT writE..

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by Ayumi

    XD.. thanks.