ThUnDeRsToRm!

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BOOM BOOM!

The people runs, the children went CRAZY!

Their parents grab their children

To stay with�� their parents.

BOOM BOOM...

When the people hears "boom"

The lighting is starting to scare them

But what about deaf people?

How possibly can they hear?

Even through I know how

Because I'm deaf

I can't hear the thunderstorm

I can't be scared

But when I feel the boom

It scares me

So scared

BOOM BOOM

I love to watch the thunderstorm

The clock starts to make a sound, "tick, tick, tick"

During the thunderstorm continue to growl

The lighting hitted the ground

The lighting on the ground continue to flow until it touches something

It will shock you

You will killed by the stock!