Oh.. this almost made me cry it was so beautiful and sweet, what friend would not want something written like this for them? the flow was really good as well, but this poem was just truly gorgeous
5/5
gabriella

Gosh, this is deep beautiful poem and I don't think you are bad author at all. 5/5 soon I will read more poems of yours. I'm planning to become an author like you, of course, I will be cartoonist too with poems. that's what I do, because I have my own secret poem book with cartoon. anyways, great poem!!! I guess I have to go. goodnight.
-K

What a sad poem. very emotive and vivid.i especially liked the stanzas
"I have learned though,
That wishes don�t come true,
Dreams are lies,
To fill our heads until we die.

The dream to live,
And be happy with you,
Was just that,
A dream and no more.

If wishes came true,
There would be no reason to cry,
But tears are flowing,
From both your beautiful eyes."
they make me think of a dream i used to have which also didin't come true.
The only thing i can pick on in this poem is that the flow is a bit off in some lines.
otherwise good write.
Love is the law
Love under will.
Rocky

Brilliant job you have done writing this wonderful poem. it is great! it flowed so nicely 5/5

~Kristina

Beautifully written

When I read this poem, I cried! It's true! It was so beautiful and sad. It was wonderful though! I know it came from the heart and I believe it!

My friend, you cried,
When I told you the price,
To save your life,
I was the sacrifice.

That was such a powerful stanza! Wow!! Great job!

Now that's a real friend. There were some moments where I felt you deterred a little from the subject but overall it was sweet 3/5