Wow. i can relate to some of this poem, i think its deep and touching and nicely written. addicted and helplessly i really liked, i mean putting those two words together because its so true.
i enjoyed reading this
geo

Unable to cope with difficult decision
^ It should have "the" before "difficult"

Ember glow in the ashes of her cigarette
^ It should be "glows"

Wow, I really liked this. Okay, the flow wasn't perfect and it did have a few awkward points but the images and metaphors you used made up for that. I especially liked the last stanza and I just really enjoyed the way you used your words. The emotion was clear too. Nicely done. 5/5

Really great poem

Dear Vanessa, this is superb. You have beautifully managed to keep the rhymes very well. There is a minute mistake in the heading, that is "Acoustic" is misspelled. However 5/5 doubtlessly.

Wow, I'm impressed. I've found it to be quite hard to write a really good rhyming acrostic, but you've apparently manged to pull it off well. Kudos for that. A much enjoyable read.

Amazing. The title drew me in, and I know how much of a great poet you are so I knew you would do justice to an Acrostic, and you definately proved me correct.
The flow of the lines together are flawless, the vocab and description you used created crystal clear imagery. It painted this scene perfectly in my mind. The rhyming was wonderful, never sounding forced. It was very deep, and didn't faulter once, ending powerfully too.
An excellent write. 5/5

Tammie

Amazingly written
i simply loved the way it worked so perfectlyyyy....its perfectly fluent..
keep it up :)
great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5

Once again i love your poem its was so capitivating, the flow and vocab were great, its was really deep touching and really got me thinking, i just really love your poems. Great job!

Wow beautiful Acrostic poem.. I like the word spelled in this poem, good job. What I really love in this poem is.. the flow.. It's really hard to 'flow' when writing acrostic poems.. You did it, well done.

5/5!

I really enjoyed this it gave a window into this person’s soul very specific word choice the rhyming seamed a little off in places but it was good.

The second i noticed it rhymed, i was worried. Then i read on, and loved it! I'm happy to see that you spent time in making it flow. I hate choppy rhymes. Great work on using artistic stanzas. 5+! --jarrod.

I really do not know what to say. This poem was fantastic. I believe it is one of the best acrostics that i have ever seen. It a great flow and the rhyme scheme was good. 5/5. Great great job.

I am a huge fan of acrostic poems. Cant write them but love to read them. This poem was well written and had a fantastic flow.

Great job.

Cicely

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