*sigh* That was beautiful =) I wish I could find a guy that would feel the same way about me =P I hope your girl knows how lucky she is =) I loved the flow of this poem and your choice of words was great =) 5/5
Rhea

Wow. that was really pretty. Sandy is a lucky girl. If only there were more of you.

:]:] that was really sweet. i like dat one too..dat girl has a good dude at her feet.