Comments : Mommy

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I love how you always seem to make the words flow together so good and your choices of words is really good too =) Another short one full of sadness and pain ^_^ 5/5
    Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Awww its so sweet especially as it portrays a little girl wondering about her mother 5/5 keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Nice poem! =O I wrote something like this.. it's called Dear Mama.. could you read and comment as well? =)
    xxx