Opposite paths

by xXLoveHates1xX   Jun 9, 2007


Waiting for the right moment
to speek to him again
if i rush my words
theyll come out in flames
but im to scared to speek
i wait not saying a word
for i know hes thinking the same
we were once friends
but now as ghosts
looking past eachothers morose eyes
drowning out memories with smiles
but only around friends
so when alone
streams fall down flushed cheeks
but this will end!
i promise.
one day.
i hope.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Georgi

    This is a very sweet poem, i can see the emotion you were trying to put into it and its well written. Just a suggestion, but you could put some punctuation in, like "," and "." and ";" just to even it all out a bit so its read more slowly and carefully =]
    other than that i thought this was great, well done
    =]
    Geo

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