This girl

by Birgit   Jun 10, 2007


I know this girl,
Full of pain, full of stress,
Yet full of beauty,
Dances like the best.

Her eyes reflect her emotions from day to day,
When he is with her,
Her eyes start to say:
Thank you, thank you for all this luck.
Thank you for heavenly eyes,
On which my eyes have stuck.

They tell him too,
He's so special to her,
They sparkle and they shine,
Telling him: "You are mine"

But when he isn't there,
Her eyes start to water,
They start to stare,
Her eyes start screaming,
Wishing he was there.

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  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    Wow!I loved this poem.The way you described how their eyes were really painted a great picture.It was full of emotion and the flow was nearly flawless.Very beautiful poem.5/5^_^

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    'Her eyes start screaming' this is an extremely figurative sentence. Very beautifully written with a nice flow. Great 5/5 dear. tc

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    Gerat job.I liked this poem.It was good.Keep on writing.Your very talented.

    Kelsie

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job. It's so sweet lol. Is this about you? lol aww I bet he misses you to lol 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by XcrissyX

    This poem really captured my emotions your a tallented writer and i loved the lat verse that made it for me xx

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