Short, sweet and flow together great =) the choice of words was fantastic and I loved that it had a clear point =) A truly fantastic write =) and a 5/5 =D
Keep it up and hope to see more like this one soon =)
Rhea

This is awesome! I loved how when you read it you can tell you had a clear thought of it in your mind and heart! Keep this up! I can't wait to read more from you!
~Love and Trust