I am.

by Michaela   Jun 10, 2007


Paranoid.

Not at the fact if others think I'm pretty, but if I agree.

Knowing that I almost lost my friends.

Broken mirrors fix, so I can see.

See the person not only on the outside, but the inside as well.

Inspired by my insperation of true friends.

Understanding that no ones perfect, friendship will never end.

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  • 18 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Hello.

    Well. To the critique.

    You must work with better flow.
    There was not enough information so the reader can INTERPRET your point of view.

    I hope that makes sence.

    It is not a Good poem. Nor excellent.

    But it isnt poor neither. And its Far BETTER than poor. But not good...

    I have to settle with "Fair".

    PLease improve your writing. You should get a dictionary. Thesauraus. And learn new words and improve your writing Power.

    I shall look for more of your future poems. You shall hear from me again.

    Always,
    [Deathly'Amore]

  • 18 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    Nice poem,really like it, im quite like that aswell....

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