Wow that was amazing!... the emotion behind it came right thru to me... wow... 5/5 from me, and keep writing... that was great!

One little heart
So full of sin
Afraid to let it out
She held it within

^i loved that... so great.. you have a way with words.

xox Saraa

This was another great one, i really adore your stlye and the ABCB rhyme that you use in your poetry. in my opinion it is the true form of poetry.
the message of the poem was great also, i specially loved how you ended the poem
Too much pain
For one little heart
Shes falling away
She's falling apart

keep it up, and another 5/5 from me.

I really liked the rhymes in this one the word choice was simple yet effective, the flow was flawless, the emtion was deep and strong, and the message was clear, You did a really great job on this one, one of the best I have read all day. 5/5

Once again this poem talks about hiding behind a smile and screams that go unheard. Many people are calling out for help, but most ignore the signs or don't take the time to notice. Great job with this poem, good flow again and great word choice 5/5 GG23

Very nice. nice flow nice rhyming and good emotion (well not really cuz its sad) alot of people feel wut u say but u put it into poetry good job :D

Because you wrote this fast the flow was really quick which I liked. Good emotion yet again. You seem to write sad poems quite well. Im sure this was heart capturing to so many people so well done on writing a poem like this. ~mel

Very well done! This is added as one of my favorite poems. Great work! I'm impressed. It's so little and it says SO much. 5/5

Wow. looks like you have alot of fans...i remember this poem. you were writing it during church. haha. but i really like it. keep writing. 5/5

No! it waz good, if that isnt your best work then u must be spectacular.... it was good.

Wow..thats really good..5/5
-Elizabeth

Yes..i liked it alot...its very nice...loved it...keep it up...bye xx

I loved this poem and if thats not your greatest work well its definatly better than any of mine!

*grace

Cute... its simple but still this poem is enjoyable and you described things nicely... although the flow is off in parts its still a 5 :D

ONCE MORE I CAN RELATE THIS POEM...GOOD WRITE.

Wow! well if you 'speed wrote' that one then perhaps you need to speed-write many more!
Brilliant!

Wow I really liked this one and I can see a lot of others did too... Its a very good one and I think many people will be able to relate this to their real life