Omgsh wow! that one was so emotion filled, and it hit me right in the heart... you rlly do have a way with words.

Hidden behind that smile
Was an agonizing past
Hittings and beating
And scars that will last

^ so many people have to go thru this, and you put it into a poem that many people could relate to... great job! 5/5 from me

That was sad, but really good

Very sad. But very good. Good seeing you around the chatroom - its always good chatting to you. Hope you're doing well.

(BTW - not sure if you meant to have the word "smile" twice in the first line... just thought I'd ask). :)

Take care

Mo
xx

That was really sad.It was good.Keep up the good work.

Kelsie

Oh, this poem was written greatly and full of emotions, yet so sad.
i really loved your style and thyme scheme. it gave a better view of your poem.
you are a talented poet, keep it up
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Aw.
That was sad, but beautifully written at the same time.
5/5.

It's amazing how easily people hide behind fake smiles, even your best of friends could fool you with such happy behaviour. Excellent job once again, your a talented writer with great potential. 5/5 GG23

Your style was good I liked it. Another simple yet effective piece of poetry you have written here which holds so much emotion which you portrayed nicely. A sad piece that was really touching. Keep up the good work~mel

What can i say?? you are a great writer. ppl love you!! keep up the good work. see you soon. <333 ya! 5/5

Wow, it was so sad, yet beautifully written, i loved the way you portray the message to the reader with such a description, it paints a perfect picture. great work 5/5