Comments : Here I Am

  • 16 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    This one went straight to my favourites. Flow was flawless. Infidelity is something that will more than likely affect most of us at some point in our lives, I think people can relate to this and really understand what you're saying.

    You captured the feeling of being in a situation that you don't really want to be in but not being able to leave it because of the way you feel about the other person. Excellent poem.

    5/5

    Sam

  • 16 years ago

    by MeeyCie

    Really good poem. I love when it rhym soo this was good. (I cant rhym that good =/ )