True meaning
honestly amazing
this is some good writing keep it up

Everyone feels this way, thats the scary thing, the way you captured it was amazing. don't change a thing.
great job<
JUlia

DANG, u got into it, it was tho

Awsome!

Again amazing one. The ending was just simply amazing. Its just showing how much of a threat we are for ourselves. Really enjoyed it, powerful.
5/5

Hey,
a strong poem, I like the words although I must say that the rhyming is a bit forced,, I love the ending though, 5/5 from me
kisses stephanie

Amazing! Took my breath away.
Great work!

You are really good keep it up

You are really good keep it up

Good job keep it up :)

WOW!! I like it.. You're pretty good at writing poems... Yep.. I liked it!

Wow. this poem is very interesting. i dont really get the whole odea of killing yourself, but it doesn't sound that nice. take care

A good poem
I don't really get what you mean
but I like it
xx

Oh gosh! this poem is intriguing!! even though its short i spent 3 mins cuz i wanted to keep reading it over and over again.. great job.. the flow was gd and u didnt force any rhymes it came out naturally beautiful.. great job! I LOVE IT

OMFG! That is awesome! I like this one the most! Why isn't it on your featured list?! lol I like it alot. Best one (dark poem) I've ever read!

DAMN!!!! THAT IS GOOD!!!!! WOW!!!!! The ending was a surprise!!! This is it!!! In this case your shortness was excellent because you left me wanting more!!! When you leave your readers wanting to know more about the story you know you have done some good writing. I LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice write!!

Nice. :) (5/5)

Ayu <3

This is really good. really emotional i guess you could say that... its scary too , but in a good way :)
<3jess

Well, done poem. I like it very much.

Very good poem
I like it...its so descriptive and scary...great job