Dreams

by leanne   Jun 11, 2007


I wanna love you,
but you're loved by others.
i wanna kiss you,
but you're being kissed by others.
i want you to be mine,
but you always say no,
which tears me up inside,
more and more evertime.

if only you can see,
what you're doing to me,
you might just change your mind,
and then ill be the girl of your dreams,
'cause you're already the guy of mine.

xXxXx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mona F

    Its kinda good but cud have been betta:)

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This has good ideas, but it could improve a little - like saying "you're" instead of your, and "say" where you (accidentally, I think) typed "so". Everyone abbreviates, but sometimes it makes the poem hard to read. Overall, the writing itself and ideas were really creative though! nice job!