Simple Words

by beautiful xx disaster   Jun 11, 2007


The sun sets as your smile begins to fade,
Your eyes open wide to take in another day,
Your thoughts spin into shades of grey,
Opening your mouth but your words fall astray.

Your heart beats like drums in your ears,
The twisting of your tongue makes you realize your fears,
Your stomach strives to hold back the tears,
You are realizing the meaning behind all the years.

You can't make a noise but you are trying to shout,
Though you can't help control your oblivious doubt,
You look in his eyes and know what it's all about,
The gripping of your gut makes the words spill out.

I love you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    This is the best of your poems (that i've read so far). i love it. keep it up =]

  • 16 years ago

    by gavin

    Its a cool poem, keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    Hey this is reallly good. <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I'd just like to start off by saying that I loved the title. It was simple and perfect for this poem. The poem itself was good, but perhaps a little too simple. The length, was good, as was what was being expressed. I usually don't like love poems because everybody thinks they can write them, when in truth, they're the hardest to write. Anyway, i think you did a good job, not excellent, but good enough.

    Brad

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