Heya, i know we dont always get on haha, but hey, im gonna read your poetry.
I liked this.
However, "baby" put me off a bit, only because i dont really like using things like that in MY poetry, but from what your writing about it actually fits quite well. I like the layout, its perfect for the topic you're writing about. The rhythm was ace, flowed really well, there were no akward pauses like there usually are with 3 stanza poems, nothing was forced which was brill =] The love and compassion throughout this was apparent and the descriptions you used, especially
"et's dance in the rain with fireflies as our only light." really emphasised their "togetherness" if you like, an almost...longing to be together, just as two. I liked it its a beautiful love poem. well done =]

You already know how I feel about this poem...it made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside...shhh dont tell anyone lol...arent you glad I ramble lol...nicely done

I liked it. The flow was good and I enjoyed the word choice. I also liked the format that you used for this poem. It all worked great together. I gave it a 5/5.

This was okay, i'm not really sure if i liked it. it was like more of a story then a poem. and the beginning of it i did not like at all, it just didnt flow right. i'm sorry i'm not trying to be mean just trying to help you out! but the meaning of the poem was okay. i'd give it a 4/5

~Kristina

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I like the end best :) the flow was good throughout, but the rhythm was a little weak. I like how it wasn't at all cliche, either - "field of fireflies" was so beautiful and original! great writing =]

Pffft. I don't know HOW this has anything less than a 5. I loved this. Actually, I think this is the first love poem of yours I have read? Maybe? Lol, anyways...a good first impression at that. ;]

"Kiss me in a field of fireflies as they steal our breath,
I'm not scared because you're there to hold me"

^^ Those two lines blew me away. I read them once and it was like BAM. Read them again and it was like FWABAM. Read them a third time and it was like BAMFWABAMKAZOOM! Lmfao. Good job, Hun.

20.5 [if only I could, lol]
<3

It was a good poem... it seemed a little weird to me though not in a bad way jsut seemed a little weird lol but i still enjoyed it... and i see you really do not like cliche things = ] anyways i gave it a 5/5

Mm. again beautiful poem. i like how its not terribly cliche. nicely, no sweetly, done.

5/5.

Wow, that was an amazing poem love. There are many cliche topics that billions of people feel the need to write about, but a lot of us put our own feelings and experiences in it, which makes it differ from the others. anyway 5/5 love.

Awwe. :]
"Find me a smile you can place on my face;
Though it won't be hard [just whisper in my ear]
And find me a shortcut to a blessing, or maybe just your kiss. "
^^Best stanza.

Amazing poem. Of course it doesn't compare with the one I just read. :] But, it's cutee. And, really goooood.
keep it up, hun.

This is very interesting poem to read. I like the way you have stated the poem and the flow throughout the piece was good. Its again a superb poem by you worth max ratings. tc

Wow, some of the images in this were beautiful:

"Let's dance in the rain with fireflies as our only light." -- Wow. Nice.

A very cute poem, with some wicked lines, making it all the better. :]