I ponder thoughts of only you
to end up screaming and
howling too. That is nice

This is deap
i like it alot.
5/5

This is really good, thankyou for sharing and thankyou for your comment on my poem :)

That was a r3ally good po3m!! pl3as3 comm3nt m3 back!!!

A lot of people obvesly love ur poems, specially this poem....I think it is good, but once again, the paragraphs just don't have enough detail or feeling to me, I feel as though you have pondered on a good thought and then cut it off to short... and some lines are cut off to short, I mean like,
"and so I
cry."
is it really necessary to have the cry on a knew line, it's kinda like....and so I...big suspense then cry...like... -_-....
I dont think u need it, I like it, But i still think there is a big space for inprovement,
Nice though
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Excellent.. u just earned a 5/5
i looooooove the structure.
u know.. u should've used "," and ".." more.. cause many dont read it right, thats why they rated lower then 5 ... and its a shame,.. this poem is very very good.
keep it up!

Very nice poem, well written and has a strong meaning. Flows nicely too.

Well done 5/5.

That was really good. thanks for commenting on my poem. I dont usually write sad poems, but lately....well, that's all I can write.

Nice poem well done *!*~*!*~*!*~*!

K thanks for your comment on mine:)
this is amaaaaazzzziiinnnng:P

12/10