This one caught my attention. So anyways, my real purpose here, the poem was great and well-written(for me) and the flow was good so I'm gonna give you.. 5/5 for that.

I liked it. i can relate to this poem so that is what i like so much about it. ill give you a 5. i liked a guy who (without knowing it) broke my heart so that is what a lot of my poems are about. i hope that you win!

Again.. one of my all time favorites.. i really like your poems.. haha im adding you to my favorites.. if you dont mind.. 5/5
-Tylor

I love this poem! Considering you don't do alot of depressing stuff, this is a good 1st. 5/5
xxx

I love this poem its one of the best iv read,
so all i can say is its AWESOME!!!!

Your pieces have many good lines, but it's your flow and the way you arrange your stanzas that makes them appear choppy....try being more conscious of syllable count and not running lines together.
Charisma*

Your pieces have many good lines, but it's your flow and the way you arrange your stanzas that makes them appear choppy....try being more conscious of syllable count and not running lines together.
Charisma*

Nice job on this one! I could really feel the emotion. 5/5

Pain is making its way
confused of what u really have to do
wishing to end the hurt
but your love is hindering you

well that's how i understand it.anyway,like this one..kEep iT Up!!

It was good.I really liked it. 5/5

Very good !

This was such a great poem! Very sad,great job showing emotions through it! Thanks for the comment on my Forgotten poem!
5/5

~Kelsey~

Hey that was good

Wow i cant beleive how much feed back you have got from this poem, it was well written , and the flow was good, i enjoyed reading it because it was simpl- yet so deep. your message was well formed and i can relate to the pain that you shared. great job
! thanks for the comment on my poem 'th break up' i hope that you can soon read some of my other poems.

kirsty
xxx

Very good. love it !
xO.

~Great poem, I can definitly relate to it... I give a 5/5...By tha way thanx for tha comment... I appreciate it :)~

This is a great poem. 5/5. i know what you mean by some of the things in this poem.
Ducky

I wish you'd go away
but i know its too good to
be true and ill always
love you.

^my fav. part!I love it!Heck I love the whole dang thing!It was awesome.Keep up the amazing work.

<3Amber

I like the rhythm and flow of this one... good work!

Funny how some addictions are people, huh?