Comments : The Voices that Betray Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Its pretty good, Flow was good for me. I really like the last stanza! well done. And I love the title of the poem! The vocab was great.

    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh that ending...I frikken love that ending!
    Intense stunning and hard hitting.
    The opening was powerful, and from there on it just got better.
    The only suggestion I would have for this is try and eliminate some of the fillers, to the make the flow absolutely flawless.
    Other than that, perfect.