Excellent!!

Thank You. You're definitely a better poet than me and rhis poem is beautiful.
All I have left to say is that I love you so so so so much and always will.
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I really enjoyed these lines

I know your voice
It's in my head

I like the way you ended many of your stanzas by saying things like, 'i know them well,' or 'they're more than fine'. It emphasized how well she is embedded within your mind and heart. Loved it!
Charisma*

I absolutely loved this. You portrayed your feelings toward this person in such beautiful words, and it flowed together throughout the whole poem. I especially loved this part:

I've sat with you
With nothing said
I know your voice
It's in my head

Great job with this!

Hmm...i did like the flow of this one, although the last stanza seemed weaker than the rest to me, as if it was just there to sum up the rest of the poem. Oh I think you have one line where the words are backwards....

As it if my own

I think you need to reverse the it and if.

Anyways, other than those minor details, the poem itself was very pretty. I really liked your 3rd from last stanza. Well put!
*ME*

If only any of this was true