Gee, descriptive word after descriptive after descriptive word. well done. this was awesome. i think everyone will have their own way of thinking bout this poem...

5/5 David

This was an intresting poem with an intresting meaning behind it.
i really like your style and word choice, you are a great writer, keep it up.

PS, i like your intrepeting of jeolousy, i think i have to agree with you.

a 5/5 as you really deserve it.

Wow, great vocabulary, really interesting meaning, great style, the flow was perfect, and it tied together great, :D loved it! 5/5

This poem was amazing and the words couldn't have been more real, I can relate to it 100%. One wrong word can bring doubt and make even the truest of truths hard to believe. The second stanza says it all in this poem so fantasticly written, the flow was great and the overall meaning as well. 5/5 GG23

Amazing one. Catches readers easy. Flow was really good. it's great how people can think of it own way making the poem even more interesting. I really liked it.
Keep writing. 5/5

=) amazing!
i love how you explain everything so well and still get your point across =)
i think the flow could have possibly been a bit better but its still an amazing poem and really drew me in!

well done!

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Hmmm i realy understand the point behind your writing .. nicely written and panned poem i will must give you 5/5

The word choice and the vocab were absoulty brillant, the flow was flawless, the emtion was deep and strong, i really liked this one i am adding it to my favs. Well done 5/5 although in my mind and heart you deserve far more than this.

You have good word choise and use it in a wonderful way! 100%.... 5/5!!!! you go!

Great poem =) perfect flow and some awesome imagry!

well done!

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Jacs
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Yet again your poem amazed me. I have no idea where to start with this. At first when I read the title I thought oh hopefully this isn't cliche and I should of know you don't write cliche you truely shocked me with this it was portrayed uniquely with a meaning of true depth. Your word choice was perfect for this poem, they held so much emotion and power which you put into this with alot of thought. A flawless flow, brilliant voacab. Really stunning. Again Tammy you have written an amazing poem which kept me interested from start to finish. Well done 5/5 you really deserve it~mel

Beautiful... Great words. I'm impressed. 4/5

Wow.. just wow... i can actually imagine your poem its really great. i love it alot.. well obviously hah. greattt job

5/5

Uhmm, can I say that the ending was more filling than the parts before? The flow of the poem was as if a robot was talking to me. To me it was like a mediocere rap song with a catchy hook. Maybe I'm not giving you enough credit, it is 9:24am here and I haven't been to bed so excuse me if I was too harsh. It was a good poem, but the rhythm made me want to drown. Try to play around with a beat in the word play, and it will come out much better. Honestly, I was too distracted to notice the words.

Re-read it just for reassurance, and the flow wasn't half as bad I said. And, I was way too harsh for the skill I saw in it the second time. Very good poem, indeed I over-reacted. That was how I felt honestly with my first comment, and all authors deserve honest opinions.

Hmmm....kool. thanks for the comment & im not with him anymore,& havent been for like 3 months. keep up the good work!