I liked the mystery here and there as it thrilled me so much..And the topic was really unique and haunting

But I would like to help you with a thing
If you use as instead of and at the first stanza,it would be perfect

Other than that dear
It was beatifully penned
Take care
Laura

Nice poem...
but don't you mean "meets the eye" in the 4th stanza? just asking...=)
i liked this...i like vampires =)
usually darkness and vampires are described like they were horrible, but not here...
i like the beauty within this poem...=))
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

Hell, i love it, damn i really love it

Beautiful poem!!..well written hehe i like vampires..well written
hope to read more like it!!:D
breexx

Aww i like it...i love vampires and this was a good tribute to them...5 stars

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Wow, so good. (i wrote something similar before.)
I like the powerful and magnificent atmosphere that you created. Your wording is superb, i like the last stanza the most. This poem deserves 5/5, if you want you can r/r/c one of mine.

Full of passion and beauty....I like how you constructed this amazing poem...god bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-