That was nice poem... good acrostic work. you should keep it up.. try to make more flow of words in acrostic writing. its may be hard but you can do. i have noticed that you can write verywell anyways. i like you poem.
i m giving you 5/5
take care

Well done, great work on this poem.

Your descriptiveness is inviting and creates pretty good imagery. Your vocab is good and this overall, was a very refreshing read. Acrostics are hard at the best of times, and just a minor suggestion; Try to flow each line, matching them in with eachother. It makes the piece easier to understand and gives it a better flow. Well done though.

Tammie

I love your poem real sweet keep up the good work 5/5

Aww that was amazing. The reason why I finally decided to comment, Is well because you've always seemed to comment one of my new released poems. Lol. Endless feelings...Such a great poem full of passion ^_^ I miss you so much by the way Cyma...We've not spoken for a while yes? ^_^

Very nice poem.
Only, I couldn't catch the flow very good, maybe when you rhyme a little more it is easyer to read?.. Anyway, further you used great words.
I enjoyed reading it.
Take care