I really like this poem. Very cute.
I love the way your ryhmes flow so smoothly.

Hold me tight but don't let go
You have so much you need to show.
Prove to me what you say is true,
Then just maybe ill want you too.

Adorable. =]
5/5
_Amber_

Very cute poem
I really enjoyed it
the flow was really nice
it was good and rhythmatic (sp?)
great job
5.5

Aw, I can relate to this so much. The flow was good and the rhyming didn't sound forced at all. I could really feel the emotion throughout this. A well written poem. 5/5

Tammie

Aw. I can definitely relate to this poem. The flow was good, and I loved how you put a lot of feeling into it.

5/5.

This was so sweet!!I can relate to it very well!!You have really done it well!!
All the best
And take care!!

Good poem. This was very adorable and sweet. Wonderfully written. You expressed your emotions beautifully. The flow in this was flawless and again the rhyming wasn't forced.
You definitely have talent. 5/5

Take Care!

-Shannon <3

Good job! This is written very sweetly, and heartfelt. You expressed your emotions wonderfully, and musically -- with great flow and vocabulary. Keep it up!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Flow was great and it was definitely emotion filled. I liked it a lot. Love is definitely a confusing thing, especially when someone says something and does another. Great job and keep it up!

Great write. I love it.
Good job!! <3

Very touching.

I was smiling while I'm reading this poem. So sweet and cute. I really love it.

Well that was really confusing piece! hmm i can relate actually, the message of this poet was truly describing about love that we can truly confuse if we had this kind of situation.. well u had portrayed ur feelings here very well! very appreciated piece keep it up! 5/5

Fair poem... You wirte really fair...

Very cute
i really liked reading it..