Comments : You Can't take Everything

  • 16 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    I like this. it sounds more like a quote than a poem though...but its still good and its really true! great job

    xo kisses xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a very short and to the point poem and I enjoyed it but the best part was the end great job I loved it Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Loved this poem!
    memories are evrything we will always have
    5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    This was good! i liked the repetitiveness, its good. Good work!

  • 15 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    This is a very good poem . A bold statement that left me thinking , they wont be taking anything from you.
    I liked the concept, style and the flow

  • 15 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow that was great i was not ready for the endding. but i do feel bad for you. im sorry. i give it a 5/5