WOW that was an awesome poem, a wonderful piece. loved it all the through , well written and very nice flow, great job and glad you got a happy ending, keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

I liked the flow on this one.

I tore apart the pillows; ripped up the bed sheets -
Cursed and screamed to the moon of your deceit,
I haven't slept in days; eyes are bloodshot red,
And the whiskey and nicotine is getting to my head.
<<that was my favorite stanza.

and so you know, ive given you 5/5's.

Awesome!!!! Like I have said you always tell a story within your poem and my how you shocked me with this one. Reminds me of my ex fiance. You speak of so much to be so young. My only wish is that you have not experienced the pain of the things you have written. You have quickly became one of my favorite poetess. Awesome Job,
Kay

Gr8 poem!!! I loved it!! 5/5