What a beautiful write..I loved reading this.well done and keep writing.

Excellent poem great flow and vocabulary was excellent, you did a wonderful job on this, very sad , but I loved it , please keep it up ,your friend Tracy dean 5/5

That was good i like it

Oh my goodness I can't believe you know my pain, its so nice to read others words, when life leaves a mind so empty..Thanks you...this 1 has difinitly given me insight

This is the best poem i have seen
you deserve more than 5/5

Wow. You are a really good writer. You use words so beautifully. It's so put together. I was reading a few of your poems and they were really great! 5/5

Really good stuff I always feel quilty
liking a poem that has so much hurt but its so well written. Does that makes sence to you? you have to listen and read the lyrics to < EVERYTHING CHANGES> by STAIND
I think you will understand when you hear it
cy

You can everything you want in life
except the way it use to be

That was truly poweful and inspiring. You're really good! Keep up the passionate work! 5/5!!