Flowing River

I really loved the start and all of it really just the ending.
right off behind.....why those words? I think there needs to be a bit more effect to these last 3 words, i would replace them or add something on the end like, nothing to worry about, for worrying doesnt exsist anymore or like just re peating the word or phrase.....and u could connect it to another verse that would make it even more interesting and affective...just trying to give some useful suggestions...
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Pretty decent ;)
its a calming poem for sure
good job once again
<3ang

Kwl poem

It's a nice nature poem. Calm and definitely refreshing. Something different. Simple write and nicely done. Nice the way it is.
~Faith-less

I love nature poems and although short, I really did like this one. It was calming which was good kind of reminded me of those tapes that are used to calm a person or put them to sleep. :] lol.

5.5