Be with me

by jack   Jun 14, 2007


I see you still
your voice wet with tears
crying For me...for me

I try to heal your pain
Take it away
But its persistence keeps nagging...nagging through your wall that decays

Your left a soft and easy mess
stripped of your clothes
And your dignity left lying in the road
Strength ever weakening

The pools that form under your eyes are getting deeper
Each tear dropped, is love dripping out of you
You long for someone to hold you
Stroke your hair
And tell you they will always be there

You try to pick up the pieces that are broken in your life
Putting them back isn't that easy

Take my hand
We will place them in together
Be silent
Be with me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    I try to heal your pain
    Take it away
    But its persistence keeps nagging...nagging through your wall that decays

    *can u edith these one*

    "But its persistence keeps nagging...nagging through your wall that decays"

    acctually its ok... but can you just enther for the next batch... ty

  • 16 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    That's dignified and sweet but still vulnerable and a little cocky. It's not to condisending though. It's an enjoyable poem. Well done.
    Please will you take a look at In Iraq On Family...I'm asking a few people because I don't really know if I like it and it's the first piece I've written in a while.
    Thanks for your time.
    Poppet

  • 16 years ago

    by Jade

    Nice and caring.

    Peace x X x

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Aw, that was really sweet and pretty. 5/5

    ~*Alex*~

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