Black unicorn

by NotCryingForHelp   Jun 15, 2007


Long black mane,
flowing in the wind.

everything grows quiet,
even dragons not dare move.

it stares back at them,
all the creatures we thought were a myth,
just standing and waiting.

the unicorns death black eyes show no fear,
she senses their fear of her,
and now it is time for her to leave into another universe.

she falls down as the portal to heaven opens,
it pulls her in.

she saved me,
because i believed in her.

and here i am,
the last person on earth.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Silver Bells

    It's good, but you need to watch your capitalization.

  • 16 years ago

    by Charbel

    I love your poem, It conveyed a very clear and unique image in my mind. One that really interests me. Love your descriptive language !!!! , sense of imagination and another world !!. , keep it up , !!!

  • 16 years ago

    by GothChick

    Good poem. The idea behind it wasn't really clear, however!

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