Haha. I loved this. It was super cute.

5/5.

This was really cute, Im sure alot of kids would love reading this sweet little poem you have written for them. The title was attention grabbing I liked it. A good little poem you have here well done on writing a poem this way. ~mel

I could not leave without giving a comment! This is sooo CUTE! Reminded me of Doctor Seus (sp?) haha, idk how to spell the name ^_^

Hey,
such a cute story/poem, the flow is nice aswell as the rhyming, I think its sooo cute =)
im sure that a lot of kids would like to read something like this, its easy to understand, so you will get a 5/5 from me;)
kisses stephanie
ps 2 for 1 ^_^

C0o0o0o0ol i like it :)

Hah!!!this was funny.the flow was excellent.the rhyming was superb.it was great in each and every stanza.lol.it was funny though.great imaginative.i loved the ending especially.good job in this piece.
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

Awe lol this is so cute

It would make a good bedtime story, awesome poem!

Great poem.
A funny story.
Nice work

OMG THAT IS REALLY REALLY CLEVER AND FUNNY.
I LIKE IT A LOT.
KEEP IT UP!