It's a good poem, but I feel like I've read it before.

Sad one. nice emotions well transfered to the reader. what can i say i like ur style. 5/5

If you look past her smile you can see her hidden tears.

That line had so much meaning for me ,for I am hiding behind that smile ,trying so hard to fight back the tears.Very well written well done!

Wow! Very well written...not to mention all the emotions this poem holds. Kepp up the good work 5/5