I love...

by I love jake   Jun 15, 2007


I love someone
bright and new
i love someone
maybe you

could it be
should it be
you and
me??!!

ilove someone
is it you
someone ilove
do u love me to??

*please comment this and see if your the one*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    Aww, short but strong ^^ But isn't the last "to" supposed to be "too"? =) Well, keep up the writing!
    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum

    Short but is one of the best flowing poems I've seen, well written. Well done :)

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