This poem gave me shivers, it kinda reflects my relationship with my mom...stay strong!
<3Niki

Aww that's sad man Dx
i hope everything's okay <3

Wonderful poem

I've felt that before. Excellent poem, full of emotion.

Ravyn

I don't want to be on your own - i think you mean i don't want YOU to be on your own :)

apart from that, i think your poem is amazing, and is really meaningful... well done
x rob

Though the flow is often interrupted in this...it's just a pretty poem with a heartwrenching message. I mean what more to say than that!?!
Charisma*

Wow beautiful poem...i cant say i feel the same but the emotions were strong enough for me to understand. great job 5/5

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Very emotional 5/5

I can really feel the emotion in this poem and i know how it feels to go through some of the stuff you metioned but i hope everything goes good for you and your mom.

This is an amazing poem. Well written, strong, and powerful. Great job. =]

A very well written, heartfelt piece of poetry 5/5 i am extremely sorry about your mum

xD
~NinjaGirl~

Omg!!that was a brill poem.ha mayb ill apreciate mam um mre nw.xxxx

Aww..thats gud

You Put So Much Emotion And Depth Into This Poem...Its Amazingly Good.

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MemberOfTheBlackParade
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Wow! what a great poem! its so deep and beautiful!

Are things ok with your mum now?

Wow this one is amazing i loved every second of it ...i wish i was close to my mom ..and i loved reading this good job keep it up

Aww.
this is really sad.
same thing happening to me right now too.
i hope eveything works out for you and your mum.

=]louii xx

OMG! that poem was really sad but you wrote it VERY beautifully!!!

This poem is amazing, i love how much emothion it shows in such powerful words. keep up the good work

Aw, that was really beautiful.