Comments : Please dont say goodbye

  • 16 years ago

    by NORAH COLLINS

    Hi sorrie nabout you en ya mum it must be hard i really liked the poem very well written my mum en i have never really been close either i try to make things better but it never seems to work i hope you have better luck if you havent already sorted things out any ways keep on writing your poems are brilliant

  • That is very sad it made me cry you have amazing talent

  • 16 years ago

    by Hermosa

    Oh this is so sweet and sad...I get the same way just by thinking my mama could leave me. thanks for commenting on my poem i really appreciate it.

  • 16 years ago

    by krystal

    Amazing completly amazing <333 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jayy x

    FUKIN BEAUTIFUL

  • 16 years ago

    by stephanie

    Awww thats so sad but i really like it!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by stacey pearce

    Wow i dont no wa els 2 say its amazin great job

    stacey xoxoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Georgia

    This is really sad but i really enjoyed reading it
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by TwilightSecrets

    Very emotional, made me cry, not saying it was meant to but i'm a really cry baby -.- Very beautiful 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    This poem was so deeply written, i can only say I hope your ok, beautifully written keep it up

  • This is a great poem! so sad!

  • 16 years ago

    by fakesmile

    Diz poem almost made me cry!! my mom and i alwayz fight over the pettiest things.. itz nice that poets like u would write a poem to your mom..lol! keep up the goodwork! 5/5
    awesome awesome poem! u rock!

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Amazing poem... you put so much emotion into it and it flows really nicely. Keep smiling,
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CatastrophicTragedyXx

    Wow this poem is very deep..it touches the heart very deeply. you can really sense the emotion and passion put behind the poem. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Good work and keep it up =]

  • 16 years ago

    by ChaosHarbour

    Wow this is really beautiful. my mom and i are starting to slip apart as well, and this really describes how im feeling. wonderful job!

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    That is so well written
    i cant wait to read more of your poems
    u should b proud
    5/5
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Awwww sooo sad!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Wow brilliant poem
    made me think, feel, cry and be grateful for my boyf.
    its a wonderful poem.
    well done
    def adding to my fav poem list.
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    Wow darling....this is really good. Thank you so much for the comment on mine. you have real talent. Keep up the good work and keep writing. Keep me posted on your new writes. :) thanks again
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by ReinaPuente

    I love this poem keep up the good work
    -lovely-