Comments : My friend.

  • 16 years ago

    by TyrantxTia

    Awe this is so sweet

  • 16 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    Omg this is magical!
    is so short but somes it up. i can realte to that
    i have a fw freinds who let me get through when im ayt my drakest...dont stop!

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I really like these shortiest this brings me to a guestion if two grow up together as best friends and one they are 16 and one of them
    gets a boy friend and falls deeply in love with him and wants to spend every waking min. with him what does the best friend do now that shes out . this happen to my daugter
    she the one who got the boyfriend and her friend feels hurt what advice do you have for
    this situation for both sides. i love her friend
    like a daughter and it hurts to watch her in pain. she's on this site she even wrote a poem called best friends check it out by jessica lynn she has alot of good poems
    cy

  • 16 years ago

    by Albert

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    love xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Short but sweet : )

    'And you my friend." <-- except it that line, it might be better to change you to you're. that's just my opinion. but overall great write, I liked it!! : )

  • 16 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Well, the poem is short, which isn't bad, the poem explains how much you love your friend, but my only problem with it is that the lines are so different, one is really short, while the others are so long, but I still liked it, I'd say 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kimberly

    :) love it! friendship! is light!

  • 14 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    Wow this is old.