A crack of light shines in and I get a glimse of happiness
Perhaps I'm not just doomed for a dark and emptyness.

I love these two lines.The word "emptyness" is misspelled. Y should be I.I like your rhyming stanzas. Its really beautifully worded. I gave you 5/5.Plsrrc my Acrotheree

I KNOW OF THIS hole you speak of
you need to climb out now befor
you get to deep. poem rocks like all yours
and i gave all your quotes 5 they are all
excellent. you thoughts are relly deep
for your age but i relate. keep writting
and i will read it and take a little piece of
the hurt away from you each time.
cy

Lovely poem mate.
There's always a way out of holes :p
5/5.

Excellent poem. beautifully written!! 5/5

Nice poem, a few typos aside it's an enjoyable read.

line2. I would take out 'in here'
line3. don't capitalize every 'D'; and 'there' should be 'their
line4. 'Theres' should be 'There's'
line8. either take out the 'a' or take out the 'and' - as it's written it's not a proper sentence

"A crack of light shines in and I get a glimse of happiness
Perhaps I'm not just doomed for a dark and emptyness"

A very awesome and powerful way to end you poem.
The flow was great. I really enjoyed it keep it up.
Elaine.

Very good :)

I can relate, very sad and deep one. You wrote it greatly, nicely expressing your emotion. My favorite lines are:
-Digging,Digging,Digging there way into my soul
Theres nothing left for me but a vast and empty hole.-
^portraying amazing image
Well done, 5/5 from me

Thanks for all the comments you guys :)
they really mean a lot.
and im sorry about typos and punctuation stuff.
Im horrible at that ;)