Ooo heartfelt and so warm, brilliant. the apostrphy didnt work but other then that perfect again :P

I think this a beautiful poem david.... you may think its nothing really but i thought it was just utterly amazing. You have a rare gift and you seem to use it wisely. Keep up the great work ...

5/5
Chan
-xx-

I LOVE this. It is such a cute, sweet and beatiful poem. All in one. =]
This really shows your love for this girl. That love overcomes all of lifes difficulties. Even at the hardest points of our lives. It was a really heartwarming poem. I really enjoyed it. Well done David. =] 5/5

Tammie

This is a fantastic poem. The flow was wonderful. I was wonderfully written. 5/5

Kalee

I really loved this one, David!
It's some talent you have, a great promise for the future.
Keep up the good work...

5/5!

Your love for her makes me want him to say things like that to me.
I love that poem.

Very nice David
I loved it!
t really showed how much you
love and crave for your princess :)
nice work
5/5
love always kaila

Ohhh I love this poem... Whoever you wrote it for definitely needs to read this. Great job with it!

P.S. I love the picture you have on your profile. It basically made me laugh my head off.

Very nicely done. i loved your poem. nice acrostic poetry . i am giving you 5/5.

Very well done
keep up the great work
.x

Very well..wonderfully written..

David,

I have read a lot of poems since you've written this one but this is still my number one love poem!

Ingrid