Aww, that last line :( im sure he would be happy reading this poem, its very touching wel done xxxxxxxxxx

Im so sorry...

Wow your poems are like really good and you have strong emotions put into them

Dear this very beautiful. I wanna tell you that the word 'seen' is un-grammatical. You must change it to 'saw'. This is really a fantastic poem.

Touching ans so sad The feeling of loss a feeling almost hard to put into words. well done, the emotion was poerful, and the word choice again brillant. 5/5 keep up the good work, and I am sorry for your loss

Such emotion and sadness embedded thru out this poem. it was simply wonderful. yet so tradicly sad.

5/5 David

I can feel how you feel. It must be so sad.
This poem has a strong emotion. ^^
Simple but wonderful... ^^
Nice poem. Good work.. 5/5

Im sorry for your loss.
This was a wonderful poem. Written with strong emotions from a hurting heart.
A beautiful peice,

Elaine.

Hey,
I'm so sorry for your loss,
its a wonderful poem, strong emotion and the end was very sad, 5/5
take care,
stephanie

That is really touching...i'll give you 5/5

I've been throught
i'm sorry
its a good poem
=]

Very good poem..... amazing thats a 5 from me too

Great poem... 5/5..