Awww, thats really good, i like it xxx

OMG this is soo true!! When a guy doesnt want you anymore, it breaks something insides that hurts so bad...

This particular poem makes me think about a boy a i know. aaaaaah. you maded my day.
the only thing is, is i have a problem with this line... "i know very so well". i think the poem would flow better if you changed it to "i know so very well."
just something i thought of.
hope i helped!
but other than that... its rlly good.
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5/5 JENNAY.

I personally dislike love/ break up type of poetry, but in this piece emotions are well expressed.
You should capitalize i (I).

That was a amazing

I've gone through this before and I thought this piece conveyed the emotions very well. Keep up the good work

Wow good poem 5/5

stacey xoxox

A well written poem! flawless wat i can?! 5/5