Aww thats very good i like your ending, keep writing xxxxxxxxxxx

This is good.

This is a very good sad poem, the emotion in it just reaches out to the reader. I especially loved this stanza because it is so true, we as humans are cursed. We do and say things to hurt people and we just can't help it sometimes. I hope you get through your heartbreak, this girl should have known how lucky she was, but you can't make the blind see. Great job on another great poem! 5/5

As I sit here shattered,
Broken by your words,
I do not blame you dear,
For you're human and it's our curse.

I've missed your poetry my dear friend
And to read your work again settles on a void of emotions.
It's so bittersweet, almost as if you've accepted the end with out a battle yet your still fighting the demons in your heart
We're all here for you
5/5
*Gem*

When people try to get their lovers to lov them u try to make ur lover happy even if it doesn't evolv u. thats romatic:)

I loved this. Its powerful, ending with accepting a fate you've been fighting for so long. Keep it up.

-cory

Something straight from heart; displays lots of emotions, i like this kind of poem.