Very nice and thought out.

wow this is really good and thankz for your comments on my poems and thanks for wishing me luck with my baby, i'm really scared about this baby many time i thought about giving it up, but when i read your poem only 15 prt 1 and 2 it made me change my mind. i dont want my son to end up like jacob alone and scared wonder'n what i'm like, so all i have to say in thanks, you might just think there just poems to you, but when someone else reads them it can change their life, once again THANKS

very good, i feel you

Hey there,
I know just how you feel right now. My bf couldn't give a shit bout me. But, I still am in love with him. He acts like he loves me when I'm just with him, but when his friends around like im not even there. He messes with my head and lies to me. We fight like every night I just wanna leave him but I love him too much! So props to you for standing up and writing this! Good job! and very well writen! Lots of Love!!!

-Carrie-

I wish i wuz strong enuff to say get lost and leave meh alone. Would prolly save alot of heartache

I wish I could be as strong as you. B-cuz I'm going through it now. I'm feeling it. It's exacly what I feel

hey thanks everyone for the coments it really means a lot to me

OH MY GOSH! You descibed my relationship PERFECTLY! WOWZERZ...Anwaysy

Yep, my boyfriend is like that...very passionate alone...an as$ around his friendz...but he's also my best friend in the world, so i cant' shut him out...he's slowly changing for the better...And I'm happy...I love him

UR AWESOME...and I know this poem is from a whle ago...but I hope that your relationship worked out

Love,
Danielle