Excellent poem ,very deep and sad, very heartfelt piece, well written and great wording , good flow, I feel your pain, great write , keep it up, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

I luv this one did you write it in your bush?

Wow

Amazing poem!..i really enjoyed it..had alot of emotions within it!...i seem to only like to write dark poems aswell!...keept it up

5/5 for me
bree xx

Wow, this was an amazing poem i must say.
it was very into depth as well as intriguing and capturative. i wouldn't change a thing :)
5/5 love.

This is realllllyyy gd! i love it and its soo meaningful, i really understand this poem and connect well with it, cant wait till you write another xx

Really good write it was really meaningful me likey alot keep writing its
osm

-laura-
p.s.plz comment some of mine thanx

This is an exquisite write dave.

i'm there, in this moment with you, every word, every line, is this your pain...or is it mine?

anna

Wow this is a great poem!!!! its so full of emotion!!!!!!!!!! i luv it
5/5
keep up the guud work!
Luv Fallen xx

Your great dont change and um ur poetry is realli deep and meaning full i love it keep it up

mwah love lisa

Its lovely..... 5/5

Nazeer

Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love your poems..

Nazeer

Great poem....very deep and full of emotion and i sometimes feel this way..

as for the poem ..flowed wonderfully.

no need for improvement here..5/5 from me.

WOW!!! This poem is simply amazing! Flow is fantastic and whole piece is written powerfully. Second stanza is my favorite one. Few lines are perfect. I am impressed!

Wow, so powerful! The imagery is especially great, very dark and vivid. The last line adds amazing effect. 5/5 from me
Keep writing, you write great dark poems.

Amazing imagery and descriptive language. It really painted a visual image in my head, Fantastic work.