That was very sweet. I'm sure you father would love it. One change to make though is 'effected' should be 'affected'.

Good enough for the first acrostic poem.. ^^
It's easy to read..
But i think it's better if every first words have their own line. ^^
Keep writing... ^^

For your first acrostic poem, I'd say it was really good : ) Very sweet too. Good job..

Good job its cool 5/5 as all yours
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