WELL DONE!
i love the way u rite
ur vry gud..
i relate 2 alot ov ur work so much
keep it coming
.x

Nice poem I think. ^^
The flow was good too.
I'm a man but I love this line,
"I wont give my heart to just any male
So fight to be patient, go all the way"
Good job. ^^
Keep writing.
5/5

I like how your poem expresses the reality of what people want in a relationship.

Love it,i can relate to it in so many levels..

Awww i love it its really goood!!!!