Amazing. That is really deep. 5/5

Very beautiful poem with overflowing strong feelings. Though you are not the dependant you have nicely written it.

I love this poem

Well written, excellent word choice simple yet effective, the flow was great, the emtion was strong, and the message was clear. great job. 5/5

I LIKE IT ALOT

Full emotion.
Nice written.
I enjoyed reading it.

If this was written as an assignment, it deserves an A. i love it when i am bored in a class and then i just start writing. usually they aren't so good at first, but they get better. excellent work!

Mm.. i like the ending, its so peaceful.

i love the whole thing.

5/5.

Cute, i love this one.
<3

Good poem really good