Iv read a few of your poems now but i kinda like this one the best :]

i think its really deep and powerful

yet if it was put into stanzas it would be better :]

even if its not a rhyming poem having stanzas makes it easier to read

on more poem and a few rates and youl have the little 'p' to go with your 'c' XD

keep it up

This one is amazing O.O The emotions were so strong that they threw me into they and made me feel going through this myself all over again ^_^ Fantastic job that deserves far more then a 5 =)
Rhea

Aww I love this poem! <33

Perfect portrayal of feelings- can totally relate- thanks 4 ur comments

Silent screams within.... I can totally relate to that! Well done.